Glencoe Writer's Choice Grade 9 ©2009
Directions: Incorporate into the given sentences the details listed in parentheses at the end of each sentence, adding or replacing words as needed. Your revision should be more colorful, convincing, and compelling than the original.
Sample: As the bottle began to go out to sea, a wave came and brought it back to the shore. (crashed, drift, enormous, pushed)
Revision: As the bottle began to drift out to sea, an enormous wave crashed and pushed it back to the shore.
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